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Write your own Amendment

This was actually an assignment I had to do in a class of mine in High School, and I thought it was pretty interesting:

Write your own amendment to the US Constitution, state why it is necessary.

What do you think? If you could make an amendment to the US Constitution what would it be?
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Re: Write your own Amendment

This is what I wrote for the assignment:

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Section 1.

Congress shall make no laws that discriminate, by exclusion, against any citizen of a specific sex, race, religion, sexual orientation, or against any citizen of any specific social, ethnic, or religious background.

Section 2.

Any terms of a law that makes reference to any specific sex, race, religious, sexual orientation, or persons of specific social, ethnic, or religious background is hereby unenforceable.

Section 3.

The Congress shall have the power to enforce this article by appropriate legislation.
The assignment asked us to write our amendment in the style that the other amendments were written. Don't worry though, you're response isn't being graded so you don't have to.
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This is what I wrote for the assignment:



The assignment asked us to write our amendment in the style that the other amendments were written. Don't worry though, you're response isn't being graded so you don't have to.
good amendment.. it would end racial preferances given for bids, scholorships and such..
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Amendment 14

1. All persons born of persons in the United States who themselves are citizens or here under valid visas or naturalized in the United States, and subject to the jurisdiction thereof, are citizens of the United States and of the State wherein they reside. No State shall make or enforce any law which shall abridge the privileges or immunities of citizens of the United States; nor shall any State deprive any person of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law; nor deny to any person within its jurisdiction the equal protection of the laws.


also

repeal 17th (a bad idea to begin with) and 26th (an abject failure I'm sorry to say in light of how hard I worked for it)
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Amendment 14

1. All persons born of persons in the United States who themselves are citizens or here under valid visas or naturalized in the United States, and subject to the jurisdiction thereof, are citizens of the United States and of the State wherein they reside. No State shall make or enforce any law which shall abridge the privileges or immunities of citizens of the United States; nor shall any State deprive any person of life, liberty, or property, without due process of law; nor deny to any person within its jurisdiction the equal protection of the laws.


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repeal 17th (a bad idea to begin with) and 26th (an abject failure I'm sorry to say in light of how hard I worked for it)
Wait... are you saying repeal the 14th, 17th, and the 26th amendments?
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good amendment.. it would end racial preferances given for bids, scholorships and such..
I actually didn't think of that. As well as ending some welfare benefits on the basis of race, it would also mean that any citizen regardless of the country he/she was born in can become president. Just another example.
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You guys are writing addendums not amendments.
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I agree, the 17th needs to go.
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Wait... are you saying repeal the 14th, 17th, and the 26th amendments?
change 14 as indicated, repeal the other two
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You guys are writing addendums not amendments.

any change to the Constitution is an amendment.
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Congress shall make no law abridging the freedom of production and trade.

10 points if you know who wrote that first without looking it up.
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Congress shall make no law abridging the freedom of production and trade.

10 points if you know who wrote that first without looking it up.
Hamiton? Sound like something he'd like. Then again, Jefferson wrote most of them, so it could be him to.

Mine, A woman has a right to an abortion, anytime, for any reason, and Gun ownership is a privilege, granted only to a select few.
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Legalization of marijuana to be taxed accordingly.

death by firing squad.

marriage is now civil unions. gays and straights alike may receive such a union.

other than some addendums to existing ammendments i can't really think of anything else
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any change to the Constitution is an amendment.
Not always, when activist judges do it, it is called "interpretation"
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Congress shall make no law abridging the freedom of production and trade.

10 points if you know who wrote that first without looking it up.
FYI, I read this in Atlas Shrugged. Someone else may have said it first, but it would be a damn good amendment. I would like to see something that protects ownership of labor and employment, namely that no one but the employee and the employer have a right to agree on terms of employment.
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